Question One - ADVANCED OPTION

Li describes his classroom as ‘freezing’ in a short introductory paragraph. Rewrite and expand this paragraph, giving a real sense of the cold and sparseness of the classroom.

i was nearly eleven years old when one day at school, the headmaster came into our freezing, blistering cold class room with four dignified people.

I was nearly eleven years old when one day at school, the headmaster came into our freezing classroom with for dignified people. We barely had any heaters or fireplace, and the window was broken so the wind was gushing inside our room. We never had enough money to afford coals so it was like sitting in Antarctica. Even the people who came in found the room freezing inside.

nick d wrote:i was nearly eleven years old when one day at school, the headmaster came into our freezing, blistering cold class room with four dignified people.

lol damn i was gonna write first

I was 10 years old when one day at school, the principle came into our freezing, blistering cold class room with four VIP's.

I was nearly eleven years old when one freezing day at school, the headmaster of Mao's ballet acadamy came into our freezing cold classroom with four other people from the dance acadamy as well.

Example of Li describing his classroom as "freezing".

Example 1) "I was nearly eleven years old when one day at school, the headmaster came into our freezing classroom with four dignified people.
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